soap opera (jonas style) chap.intro

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INTRO

There once was a gurl named madaline n'd she had a sis named kilea
they were not the luckest gurl in the world they got raped @ 12 n'd molested
at 15 wich iz kinda the same thing luckly they lived in a orphanage because the rest
of her family were worst then her parents they had 2 sleep in the addict n'd stay there 4 like dayz
so that they couldn't come out cuz there mom hated them they would alwayz tell her n'd her
sister that they were gods mistake n'd they didn't deserve 2 belive now remember
there mom n'd dad were druggiez so they would come home half high n'd half druck either way
they still gt beaten up they didn't have a TV or a radio so they never knew wat waz happening in the outside world
but there mom and dad got sent 2 jail 4 lyfe
the orphanage was the best place they every been 2 they got food slept in nice beds n'd met great people .......
luckily they never thought in there whole lives that they would get 2 meet the Jonas Brothers ...............
(Chap.3 coming soom)

aw, that's sad. keep writing! xD

Thats rlly cool!!! keep writin'!! xD

that's really good

please write in normal english & complete sentences.

That's really good actually
Kind of tragical, but still cool, but could you write more
"proper" english? No offends, but I'm from Norway, so it's a little hard

Hope to read more soon!

YOur an awesome writer! Keep Upp The Good work.

I love the idea of drama but I would really much rather it didn't have anything really bad in it (like some of the stuff that happens to the girl) no offence its jsut I've had to stop reading lots of fanfics cuase they had too much stuff like htat in them!

When is Chapter three ever going to come?

Yea, it's a bit inappropriate, but it's art, right

Uh-Huh.

NickJHero_1608 wrote:

I love the idea of drama but I would really much rather it didn't have anything really bad in it (like some of the stuff that happens to the girl) no offence its jsut I've had to stop reading lots of fanfics cuase they had too much stuff like htat in them!

Yeah, I know what you mean. The things that happen to the girl are not really appropriate but still, its okay.

Hahaah... BUt when you think about it, that's what's the main selling base today..
Movies, songs and books are based on sexual tension (sorry if the words are inappropriate)
I'll edit if they are

The world is a crazy place

painted_dreams wrote:

Hahaah... BUt when you think about it, that's what's the main selling base today..
Movies, songs and books are based on sexual tension (sorry if the words are inappropriate)
I'll edit if they are

Yeah, Thats true.

it annoys me.. that's why I appreciate movies like "pride & prejudice" that are about love and not
what it leads too

I'm wayy too captivated of Twilight!! I love it, can't wait for the movie in november!